8 Comments
User's avatar
Seth Chambers's avatar

This story moved right along and it packs a lot of twists in a short space.

M.E. Proctor's avatar

Now I know what Michael Bracken means when he says he occasionally writes romance ... Great story!

Andrew Kass's avatar

Triple-cross, excellent!

Sarah Maury Swan's avatar

The place names are great and the story is compelling.

Sarah Maury Swan's avatar

But it was easy to tell who the real mastermind, or should I say madam-mind of the story was.

Matthew Fries's avatar

Great twists.

John Bosworth's avatar

Nice one! Starting February off with a bang. Romance is in the air.

Robert Petyo's avatar

Well doine. Holds the reader from beginning to end.